Pitch presentation

In my presentation i mentioned that i would like to have my music video in a night club, the reason for this being is that i want to give my music video a night club atmosphere, and i want my song to cut to the beat really fast, however i forgot to mention that i would like there to be a smoke machine, in the night club so it makes the empty space look full up so for instance if there isnt that many people in my music video the, smoke machine will cover for that giving the shot a misty and cool look.

My audience probable said that the strengths of my music video would be the technicality off it and my locations for it, so for instance i mentioned it would be shot mostly in a night club that i have permission for so already i have covered the main issue for my music video which would be the locations so it shows i have strengths in my strategies for my music videos and the expression in my ideas. I would also so that my audience beliefs that i have stuck to my budget and that it covers as one of my strong points, because i have been able to provide my audience with facts and proof of my allegations made during my pitch.

My audience did say that i can make a couple of improvements so for instance they said the music video sounds to basic and doesn't have an element of surprise or a new feel to it, so i was thinking on working on there feedback and might add different concepts to my music videos or even maybe a new location and a twist to the lyrics.However i will also need to consider more of my camera angles and techniques before making my music video because i think most importantly that's how you get your emotions out to your target audience through camera language.

The changes that i will  probable make to my music video  will be, the use of props so for instance if i cant get all the nice cars i wont i will probable have to think off a new concept for that scene and i might have to add different ideas into one so for instance i really wasn't considering to use green screen however if i cant mange to get the shots i want from my locations i will have to make do with the green screen and think about what shots i wont to add from there, however i don't really want to use green screen because i think it will make the music video look less realistic and might add an element of falseness to it.